Politics+and+the+english+Language


 * Ronald Reagan**
 * First Inaugural Speech-1981**
 * PRETENTIOUS DICTION**
 * Kayla Boyer**

Mr. President, I want our fellow citizens to know how much you did to carry on this tradition. By your gracious cooperation in the transition process, you have shown a watching world that we are a united people pledged to maintaining a political system which guarantees individual liberty to a greater degree than any other, and I thank you and your people for all your help in maintaining the continuity which is the bulwark of our Republic.‍ The business of our nation goes forward. These United States are confronted with an economic affliction of great proportions. We suffer from the longest and one of the worst sustained inflations in our national history. It distorts our economic decisions, penalizes thrift, and crushes the struggling young and the fixed-income elderly alike. It threatens to shatter the lives of millions of our people.‍ Idle industries have cast workers into unemployment, causing human misery and personal indignity. Those who do work are denied a fair return for their labor by a tax system which penalizes successful achievement and keeps us from maintaining full productivity.‍ But great as our tax burden is, it has not kept pace with public spending. For decades, we have piled deficit upon deficit, mortgaging our future and our children's future for the temporary convenience of the present. To continue this long trend is to guarantee tremendous social, cultural, political, and economic upheavals. ‍ You and I, as individuals, can, by borrowing, live beyond our means, but for only a limited period of time. Why, then, should we think that collectively, as a nation, we are not bound by that same limitation?‍ We must act today in order to preserve tomorrow. And let there be no misunderstanding—we are going to begin to act, beginning today.‍ The economic ills we suffer have come upon us over several decades. They will not go away in days, weeks, or months, but they will go away. They will go away because we, as Americans, have the capacity now, as we have had in the past, to do whatever needs to be done to preserve this last and greatest bastion of freedom.‍ In this present crisis, government is not the solution to our problem.‍ From time to time, we have been tempted to believe that society has become too complex to be managed by self-rule, that government by an elite group is superior to government for, by, and of the people. But if no one among us is capable of governing himself, then who among us has the capacity to govern someone else? All of us together, in and out of government, must bear the burden. The solutions we seek must be equitable, with no one group singled out to pay a higher price.‍ We hear much of special interest groups. Our concern must be for a special interest group that has been too long neglected. It knows no sectional boundaries or ethnic and racial divisions, and it crosses political party lines. It is made up of men and women who raise our food, patrol our streets, man our mines and our factories, teach our children, keep our homes, and heal us when we are sick—professionals, industrialists, shopkeepers, clerks, cabbies, and truckdrivers. They are, in short, "We the people," this breed called Americans.‍ Well, this administration's objective will be a healthy, vigorous, growing economy that provides equal opportunity for all Americans, with no barriers born of bigotry or discrimination. Putting America back to work means putting all Americans back to work. Ending inflation means freeing all Americans from the terror of runaway living costs. All must share in the productive work of this "new beginning" and all must share in the bounty of a revived economy. With the idealism and fair play which are the core of our system and our strength, we can have a strong and prosperous America at peace with itself and the world.

This moving speech by Ronald Reagan was announced during his first Inaugural Address. Through this speech, he speaks about what he hopes the nation will achieve throughout his presidency. He continues on to address that the people and the administration will work hard and strive for positive changes in the nation. However, Reagan often uses pretentious diction throughout this speech. Now, Orwell stated that pretentious diction is words that are too difficult, when there are easier words that could replace it and that they are words with little meaning. Because of the difficult and unnecessary diction, the speech becomes more difficult to understand to the point of confusion. Thus, the audience becomes unfamiliar about Reagan's opinions on certain matters, fogging Reagan’s true intentions for the future U.S. They are focused on guessing the definitions of big words, which prevents the speech from being effective. It would have been much easier if Reagan had used simpler words. Simpler words are easier to understand, and they fulfill the job of clarifying the main point of the speech.

CITATION: "Ronald Reagan: First Inaugural Address. U.S. Inaugural Addresses. 1989." //Bartleby.com: Great Books Online -- Quotes, Poems, Novels, Classics and Hundreds More//. Web. 15 Feb. 2011. <[]>.


 * Nelson Mandala**
 * Inaugural Speech, Pretoria- 1994**
 * STALE IMAGERY**
 * Kendra Latta**

Each time one of us touches the soil of this land, we feel a sense of personal renewal. The national mood changes as the seasons change. We are moved by a sense of joy and exhilaration when the grass turns green and the flowers bloom. That spiritual and physical oneness we all share with this common homeland explains the depth of the pain we all carried in our hearts as we saw our country tear itself apart in a terrible conflict, and as we saw it spurned, outlawed and isolated by the peoples of the world, precisely because it has become the universal base of the pernicious ideology and practice of racism and racial oppression. We, the people of South Africa, feel fulfilled that humanity has taken us back into its bosom, that we, who were outlaws not so long ago, have today been given the rare privilege to be host to the nations of the world on our own soil. We thank all our distinguished international guests for having come to take possession with the people of our country of what is, after all, a common victory for justice, for peace, for human dignity. We trust that you will continue to stand by us as we tackle the challenges of building peace, prosperity, non-sexism,non-racialism and democracy. We deeply appreciate the role that the masses of our people and their political mass democratic, religious, women, youth,business, traditional and other leaders have played to bring about this conclusion. Not least among them is my Second Deputy President, the Honourable F.W. de Klerk. We would also like to pay tribute to our security forces, in all their ranks, for the distinguished role they have played in securing our first democratic elections and the transition to democracy, from blood-thirsty forces which still refuse to see the light. The time for the healing of the wounds has come. The moment to bridge the chasms that divide us has come. The time to build is upon us. We have, at last, achieved our political emancipation. We pledge ourselves to liberate all our people from the continuing bondage of poverty, deprivation, suffering, gender and other discrimination. We succeeded to take our last steps to freedom in conditions of relative peace. We commit ourselves to the construction of a complete, just and lasting peace.

This captivating speech was given by Nelson Mandela when he was inaugurated as the South African president. During this point in history, South Africa was in complete chaos, and Mandela hoped this speech would help revive his nation. Mandela uses stale imagery thought his speech which in turn, causes his main point to become skewed. His reference to “the moment to bridge the chasms that divide us has come,” is used much too commonly throughout the piece and becomes very vague. Instead of saying “the moment bridge the chasms that divide us has come,” he should have stated the issues that forced the nation to divide in the first place. His statement of the “grass turning green,” “flowers bloom,” and “…as the seasons change,” is used often also. Instead of providing a clear, cut image of what Mandela is trying to portray, the stale imagery prevents his audience from completely understanding his intentions and future motives. CITATION: "Inaugural Speech, Pretoria [Mandela]- 5/10/94." //African Studies Center, University of Pennsylvania//. Web. 14 Feb. 2011. <[]>.


 * John F. Kennedy **
 * Man on the Moon Address- 1962 **
 * DYING METAPHORS **
 * Yaegy Kim **

Those who came before us made certain that this country rode the first waves of the industrial revolution, the first waves of modern invention, and the first wave of nuclear power, and this generation does not intend to founder in the backwash of the coming age of space. We mean to be a part of it--we mean to lead it. For the eyes of the world now look into space, to the moon and to the planets beyond, and we have vowed that we shall not see it governed by a hostile flag of conquest, but by a banner of freedom and peace. We have vowed that we shall not see space filled with weapons of mass destruction, but with instruments of knowledge and understanding. Yet the vows of this Nation can only be fulfilled if we in this Nation are first, and, therefore, we intend to be first. In short, our leadership in science and industry, our hopes for peace and security, our obligations to ourselves as well as others, all require us to make this effort, to solve these mysteries, to solve them for the good of all men, and to become the world's leading space-faring nation. We set sail on this new sea because there is new knowledge to be gained, and new rights to be won, and they must be won and used for the progress of all people. For space science, like nuclear science and all technology, has no conscience of its own. Whether it will become a force for good or ill depends on man, and only if the United States occupies a position of pre-eminence can we help decide whether this new ocean will be a sea of peace or a new terrifying theater of war. I do not say that we should or will go unprotected against the hostile misuse of space any more than we go unprotected against the hostile use of land or sea, but I do say that space can be explored and mastered without feeding the fires of war, without repeating the mistakes that man has made in extending his writ around this globe of ours.

During John F. Kennedy’s speech (Man on the Moon) about exploring, the moon and space is compared to exploring the sea. John F. Kennedy is unable to share his purpose to its fullest extent because of his overuse of dying metaphors. He has mulitple references to water such as “rode the first waves of the industrial revolution" the first waves of modern invention, and the first wave of nuclear power, does not intend to founder in the backwash of the coming age of space,” already blurs the true purpose of his speech, which is exploring space. When he compares exploring space with setting “sail on this new sea,” it brings in more confusion because exploring the space and the sea is different in so many aspects. He uses the reference to the water too often which makes people wonder if he is talking about exploring the ocean or some sort of body of water.

CITATION:"President John F. Kennedy - Man On the Moon Address." //Home Of Heroes Home Page//. Web. 14 Feb. 2011. <[]>.

**Stale Imagery =** word **Pretentious Diction =** word **Dying Metaphor =** word
 * Barrack Obama**
 * Inaugural Address- 2009**
 * Kayla, Kendra, Yaegy **

Forty-four Americans have now taken the presidential oath. The words have been spoken during rising tides of prosperity and the still waters of peace. Yet, every so often, the oath is taken amidst gathering clouds and raging storms. At these moments, America has carried on not simply because of the skill or vision of those in high office, but because we, the people, have remained faithful to the ideals of our forebears and true to our founding documents. So it has been; so it must be with this generation of Americans. That we are in the midst of crisis is now well understood. Our nation is at war against a far-reaching network of violence and hatred. Our economy is badly weakened, a consequence of greed and irresponsibility on the part of some, but also our collective failure to make hard choices and prepare the nation for a new age. Homes have been lost, jobs shed, businesses shuttered. Our health care is too costly, our schools fail too many --> These are the indicators of crisis, subject to data and statistics. Less measurable, but no less profound, is a sapping of confidence across our land; a nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, that the next generation must lower its sights. Today I say to you that the challenges we face are real. They are serious and they are many. They will not be met easily or in a short span of time. But know this America: They will be met. On this day, we gather because we have chosen hope over fear, unity of purpose over conflict and discord. On this day, we come to proclaim an end to the petty grievances and false promises, the recriminations and worn-out dogmas that for far too long have strangled our politics. We remain a young nation. But in the words of Scripture, the time has come to set aside childish things. The time has come to reaffirm our enduring spirit; to choose our better history; to carry forward that precious gift, that noble idea passed on from generation to generation: the God-given promise that all are equal, all are free, and all deserve a chance to pursue their full measure of happiness. (Applause.) In reaffirming the greatness of our nation we understand that greatness is never a given. It must be earned. Our journey has never been one of short-cuts or settling for less. It has not been the path for the faint-hearted, for those that prefer leisure over work, or seek only the pleasures of riches and fame. Rather, it has been the risk-takers, the doers, the makers of things -- some celebrated, but more often men and women obscure in their labor -- who have carried us up the long rugged path towards prosperity and freedom. For us, they packed up their few worldly possessions and traveled across oceans in search of a new life. For us, they toiled in sweatshops, and settled the West, endured the lash of the whip, and plowed the hard earth. For us, they fought and died in places like Concord and Gettysburg, Normandy and Khe Sahn.

Throughout Barrack Obama’s Inaugural Address, there is a consistent number of stale imagery, pretentious diction, and dying metaphor obscuring the direct meaning of his message and as a whole, losing its effectiveness. In the beginning of his speech, he describes the current problems at hand in the United States by trying to set an imagery of the economic crisis, yet does this ineffectively. He illustrates the audience that we are “in the midst of crisis”, but it does not clarify that there are concrete problems at hand. A vague imagery gives a vague understanding of what Obama is trying to say. This leads to an unclear and ultimately losing its effectiveness on the audience. What would have been better was to instead describe how the U.S. is confronted with issues. He describes how “homes have been lost, jobs shed, businesses shuttered”. Although it does show how people in America are having hard times, it does not clearly state this claim. Therefore, it would have been better to say “people are suffering” to directly let the audience comprehend this statement. Also, Obama includes pretentious diction when simpler words could have been used to let a general audience grasp his overall claim. He used the words such as “recriminations” and “dogmas” which is the same word for accusations. His complex diction loses most of a general audience’s attention. As a result, the most of the audience cannot thoroughly understand his claim of the many circumstances in political world in order to contrast his argument for the people of American to overcome this with an “enduring spirit” and happiness. Furthermore, his use of dying metaphors interferes with the comprehension of the audience as a metaphor is used to make similar comparisons. He begins by saying America is in “rising tides of prosperity and the still waters of peace”. This is not a clear comparison of peaceful and joyful times. “Rising tides” can be misinterpreted as a harmful picture, weakening the word of prosperity. Instead of making a misleading metaphor, it could have been plainly said that words have been spoken during joyful and peaceful times.

CITATION: "President Barack Obama's Inaugural Address." //The White House//. Web. 15 Feb. 2011. <[]>.


 * Revision: Barrack Obama**
 * Kayla, Kendra, Yaegy**

Forty-four Americans have now taken the presidential oath. The words have been spoken during times of joy and peace yet, every so often, the oath is taken amidst gathering clouds and raging storms. At these moments, America has carried on not simply because of the skill or vision of those in high office, but because we, the people, have remained faithful to the ideals of our forebears and true to our founding documents.

So it has been; so it must be with this generation of Americans. That we are confronted with issues is now well understood. Our nation is at war against a far-reaching network of violence and hatred. Our economy is badly weakened, a consequence of greed and irresponsibility on the part of some, but also our collective failure to make hard choices and prepare the nation for a new age. People are suffering. Our health care is too costly, our schools fail too many -- and each day brings further evidence that the ways we use energy strengthen our adversaries and threaten our planet. These are the indicators of crisis, subject to data and statistics. Less measurable, but no less profound, is a sapping of confidence across our land; a nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, that the next generation must lower its sights.

Today I say to you that the challenges we face are real. They are serious and they are many. They will not be met easily or in a short span of time. But know this America: They will be met.

On this day, we gather because we have chosen hope over fear, unity of purpose over conflict and discord. On this day, we come to proclaim an end to the petty grievances and false promises, the accusations and worn-out beliefs that for far too long have strangled our politics. We remain a young nation. But in the words of Scripture, the time has come to set aside childish things. The time has come to reaffirm our enduring spirit; to choose our better history; to carry forward that precious gift, that noble idea passed on from generation to generation: the God-given promise that all are equal, all are free, and all deserve a chance to pursue their full measure of happiness.

In re-announcing the greatness of our nation we understand that greatness is never a given. It must be earned. Our journey has never been one of short-cuts or settling for less. It has not been the path for the faint-hearted, for those that prefer rest over work, or seek only the pleasures of riches and fame. Rather, it has been the risk-takers, the doers, the makers of things -- some celebrated, but more often men and women complicated in their labor -- who have carried us up the long rugged path towards prosperity and freedom. For us, they packed up their few worldly possessions and traveled across oceans in search of a new life. For us, they toiled in sweatshops, and settled the West, endured the lash of the whip, and plowed the hard earth. They sacrificed everything for our well-being.